This is a story of Chinese mythology.
Ancient time, in the northern wilderness is a towering mountains,Deep in the mountains, living with a giant person,his name is KUA FU.
One year , the weather is very hot ,Trees have withered, rivers have dried up.He said"The sun is too abominable ! I have to catch up with the sun, it caught.HeToward the direction of the sun to rise, big step forward.The sun in the sky flying move, Kua Fu desperately running on the ground. He crossed a bigger mountain, crossed a river.
Kua Fu has been chasing the sun to run, watching from the sun draws near, his confidence growing. Finally, Kua Fu place in the sun to catch up with the sun.But unusually hot sun, He was also tired and thirsty,so he went to Yellow River, breath drink the Yellow River water,But he felt very thirsty,Therefore, he went the distance to find water.however,he not come on ,he was daid.
His arm become mountain,his blood become water.
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THE TITLE SHOULD BE LIKE THIS:
Kua Fu RACES with the sun.
THE STORY IS VERY INTERESTING BUT YOU DID MAKE SOME ERRORS. PLEASE CORRECT THEM OKAY.
HERE IS AN EXAMPLE ON HOW TO DO YOUR CORRECTIONS:
This is a Chinese mythology.
IN THE ancient timeS, THERE LIVED A GIANT NAMED KUA FU.
RE-WRITE THE WHOLE TEXT AGAIN. I WANT TO SEE THE CORRECTIONS AFTER THE NEW YEAR HOLS.
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